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Toadi Firma-fixed

April 15th, 2011, 8:02 am

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Reply Triple AAA, April 15th, 2011, 8:14 am

Still looks ugly.

Reply Hero of Comedy, April 15th, 2011, 8:43 am

Well when I want your opinion,
I'll ask for it.

Reply godmoderncommander, April 15th, 2011, 9:25 am

It still could use some work.

What program do you use because I think you can do better word bubbles then these crappy ones.

I not trying to bring you down or anything but you could use some advice.

Reply BurningLeo, April 15th, 2011, 1:14 pm

Meh, it needs work but has a lot more potential than some other artists.

Reply Tailsgod, April 15th, 2011, 2:56 pm

I agree with burning leo, I've seen worse (look at what i was when i started)

Reply BurningLeo, April 15th, 2011, 4:10 pm

I mean, I can clearly see that you tried, and I give you credit for that. Too many people just don't care how their art looks, but you seem to.

Some easy ways to improve are to save in PNG format instead of JPEG. As for the speach bubbles, you can either look for a sheet of them online, or I could send you a PM with the ones I use. This is assuming you're using paint. You definatly have the makings of a good spriter in you, just keep making small improvements, and you'll get better.

In case I'm making it hard to tell, I'm not talking down to you, for I am probably considered to be in the middle of the range of spriting talent.


On a side note, I probably won't be doing my intro soon, as I am trying to create a new character, with little success.

Reply godmoderncommander, April 15th, 2011, 8:48 pm

I agree with the others. Hell, I been through the same thing you are going through right now. I had people getting onto me that I suck and such. But I took it in, took whatever advice they gave me, and I got better and became the guy I am today.

Reply Hero of Comedy, April 16th, 2011, 8:11 am

I didn't have a lot to work with.
I used a simple paint program.
It seemed like a good start since I just started spriting.

Reply Tailsgod, April 16th, 2011, 2:30 pm

download gimp, its what i use, its like Photoshop's opensource twin brother from kentucky

Reply godmoderncommander, April 17th, 2011, 9:14 am

It's free unlike Photoshop.

Reply Hero of Comedy, April 18th, 2011, 10:07 pm

Thanks for the advice,
at least when I updated Spriter's resort it didn't turn out as bad as this.

Reply Hero of Comedy, April 18th, 2011, 10:38 pm

I take that back.

Edit I'm gonna focus on my new comic Brawling gets chaotic
for a while until I've done some good work with it.

Reply kwane, April 24th, 2011, 6:08 am

can i join?

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